I figured I'd use the critique to work this design.



This is a rough sketch. Ideas? Suggestions? design name?

i wish there was one rebel rabbit smoking a cigg, with a rambo bandana and a flamethrower waiting to toast the giant carrot

he would have that "Not this crap again" look on his face

also some squished bunnies on the foot there would be funny maybe

It looks cool. It's kind of hard this earlier into the concept to be able to give it much of a critique.



Is that a 6 on the bottom of the carrots foot?

I do like it Edword & its very cutezy Threadless but I can't help thinking I've seen a carrot chasing rabbits soemewhere before sorry I cant be more helpful

maltz not a bad idea.



hahaha no 6 on the foot. tollfree, I'm sure there has been a "carrot revenge design" or 2 but figured I give it a stab any way.

i just want to see a Rambo Rabbit....because I can't draw it

there was Bunnies.. but they were evil bunnies chasing the carrot.



But I love this Edword! I want it immediately. My only suggestion would be when you get to the coloring stage is that I'd like the bunnies to remain kinda fuzzy and cute. I dunno if threadless offers flock printing as something they do now or not but it would be even more awsome if the bunnies were fuzzy.

Maltz I'll draw you a rambo rabbit.



pyralis yes the bunnies would be full on fluzzy fo sho.

my only suggestion is to make the arms more leafy and the foot more rooty. looks good!

or...lose the foot altogether and make him burtsing out of the ground...chunks of earth flying out. sorta like tremors or something

Those are some great suggestions. thanks!

Edword, listen to Maltz. He is a genius ahead of his time. I could never have given better advice than that.

i like the idea of bursting out of the ground and not walking. a huge explosion of a carrot coming out, sharp claws on the fingers maybe even clutching one unfortunate bunny grasping for another one.

maybe holding it by the tail and it dangling with a frown?

Nice concept, but I'll have to reserve judgement until I see any revisions based on everyone else's suggestions.



PS, please check out my critques!

for some reason this reminds my of the power puff girls, the one where the brocolli attacks



my suggestion- color it- jk!



The only thing i can think of is i want one of the front bunnys to have a piece of the carrot in their mouth with a "oh shit what have I done" look on their face, and just a little chunk of the carrot taken off

at last those damn rabbits get their comeuppance!



this looks like a great concept.

I was going between coming out of the ground and huge walking carrot I liked walking better because of the action the the huge foot gave to the design.



unfortunate bunny noted!

rabbit with carrot in mouth noted!

the bunnies are ridiculously cute! :)

i like it a lot, go further with the suggestions



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20380/French_Fry

i like the foot prints in the back

i love the whole idea! and Maltzmania suggestion too! maybe the rabbit-rambo could be in the back. cheers

real nice concept ..... yeah, work on this baby! check out mine .....www.threadless.com/critique/20148sumer_to_winter

alot more to do.....

hmm.. I need to make the moster as big as the frist one.

*monster

I agree, he's to small. It's great, all the feedback you got on the sketch tough. Can't wait to see this thing in color! Keep it coming!

wow this is going to be amazing when it's colored! future 5$ from me

needs moar ramborabbit...jk



this is awesome

that carrot monster is incredible!

i kinda think it would be funny to have on oblivious rabbit eating a carrot

yeah very cool!

AC I was thinking that last night! right in the middle as all the other rabbits are running by him. nice!!

love it

I can't wait to see this in colour! The line art is incredible!



Critique Mine?

color! ^.^ with some dead bunnies stuck to the bottom of his feet. I'd buy it when it's all done ^.^ i also love the oblivious bunny eating a carrot idea

Ram-bit! The force of free-eedom! Seriously though, I like the idea of the oblivious rabbit. Maybe he's hugging a Carrot with a little heart over his head?

Yeah I'm thinking bigger monster, more rabbits, and the oblivious rabbit chowin' down on a carrot.

The thumbnail is an eyesore.

very nice. looking good mister

wanna see some dirt chunks flying off the monster.



more mayhem must be created...



maybe on the hills in the background fields with carrots? like he came from a garden?

this is an amazing piece. it will be absolutely amazing when colored

fooling around with some color.

the colors are good.

i suggest making the bunnies look scared.

Hehehhee.... I like the fat one....

I still like the very first sketch most. Looks cool and I'd wear the sketch on a grey tshirt or something.

Still alot of work to be done on this. I was trying out some color. the color won't be this loose when I'm done.

I like these colors. Maybe a hint of blue sky behind those hills. It would make the orange carrot pop even more.

and the thumbnail is scary.

HAHA i love the carrot top thumbnail. cool shirt too, its about time those damn rabbits pay for their heinous crimes against carrots

love the rabbit in the center innocently chomping.



You said you have more to do, so won't ask why one rabbit was left white.



Think it looks really cool, reminds me in some way of the wallace and gromit movie, only moving on from were-rabbit to were-carrot.

lookin good man...can't wait to see the final

great idea. looking forward to another version with neeter colour

HaHA! hilarious shirt! I kind of like sthe sloppy paint job. it adds to the humor. just a few orange blocks on the small carrots, lose the white patch on the rabbit to the right and this is done, son!



crit mine?

its not my style

looking good, but i would go with a lighter desaturated color scheme, maybe watercolor-ish, let the nice linework show through

yeah still foolin around with colors and and a lot more detail (I can't help it) I'd say this is olny 40% done right here.

So the monster is about done.

This is pretty good



another idea is a giant killer rabbit biting off Carrot Top's head

I love the style. I wonder if you might add more of a sense of impending doom if you redirect the the carrot's eyes to the rabbit munching away on his brethren. Also, maybe color those small carrots as well to make him more apparent. Critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/20551/Stick_it_to_the_Fisherman

still working.....

looking good

love the illustration man - killer textures

I agree, nice work ed!

hey thanks guys! should finish up soon.

it's lookin' really good!

maybe holding a carrot trident? ide buy this.

beautiful! keep at it! you rock!

Nice.



Maybe you have green grass and bw grass because it's still in process - but I quite like the two different grass treatments - it's giving the drawing some depth and variety.



Not so keen about the chomping rabbit, I don't mind the concept of including him - but it's a bit of a dead spot in the composition at the moment. Maybe if he was off to the left, so that it provided a compositional counter balance? Or on the back?



Love those bounding bunnies.My first attempt - if you're interested, please be vicious. I can take it.

thanks guys!! had some great input on this, hope to finish it up tonight.

awesome textures Ed!

lookin awesome.... keep it up...

great design... it will look killer when it is done.

I wish I could go home and work on this...... but I'm stuck at work:(

haha! this is amazing!

I'd wear this in a second.





i suggest...you leave work early.

comming out nicely man

looks great man! I understand you're going to do the same color treatment to the entire grass? That would really bring this to the finish

funny stuff dude

submit pronto!

if this doesn't win there is no god.

The color in the small carrots looks great. Nice job.

Thanks Guys!



Ehud L - yeah I plan doing it all like the hill on the right.

The bunny eating the carrots at the bottom is so cute! I really like the design. Maybe make all the grass green instead of just the one hill in the background

I love this design! I agree with Chrissylou. I think all of the hills would look good if they were green.

well I got alot done but I stillz gotz some to go.

Not much to say except, keep up the good work, hope to see the final product soon.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/344462/Home_Sweet_Gnome

I will buy this.

Please sub!!!



Mine?

This is amazing, Cannot wait to see the finished design

Stuck at work again :( come on 5 o'clock!

this is looking great! I am loving the grass now! I also really dig the one bunny that is munching on the carrot. nice work man!

Work always gets in the way of my threadless designs. It's looking great!

This is pretty nice. I believe I'd buy this.

I think this is pretty much it. I lost the foot print in the back. I didn't think it was doing much for the design.

Oh yeah any name suggestions would be great!!



Carrot Rage is dumb!

Mother was wrong

oh and turned out great

this is amazing!!! my only (slight) complaint is that the hills in the background are very symmetrical and almost a little narrow looking. maybe widen them out a bit and fade them like you did near the bottom?

"In soviet Russia..." jk

thank ac



afish- you may have a point! I'm done for tonight doe...

i don't blame you, you've done a lot! even if you didn't change anything i'd say it's worthy of submission

looks killer ed!

amazing!

woaaa!!! im reallly impressed!!! thatt looks so good!!! i think this is it!!(you really know how to make illustrations!!! i admire you!!)



if you want please critique mine too [:

"Vitamin Ahhhh!"

ps- carrots are rich in Vitamin A.

thanks guys!



need a name



"Mother was wrong"



"Vitamin Ahhhh!"



"Bitting Back"



"veggie vengeance"



????????

oh



"root of evil"

Attack of Vitamin C

The only thing I would change is to make the monster look as though he is focussed on the bunny eating the carrot... It would be subtle but it would add slightly more tension to the scene as a whole... Root of all Evil ftw!

so maybe just move the right eyes iris to the left a bit?

or you could just add the white shine of the eyes looking toward the rabbit...if that makes sense

yeah I get cha

bwahahaha i like the bunny just to the left of the carrot eating one it looks like he's saying "you've doomed us all!!"

wow it's so tight to see where this has come

fantastic



love the one just mowin down without a care in the world

Sweet! I've been watching the progress from the sidelines and it looks great. The only thing I'd say is that maybe there's a better spot for the oblivious rabbit, besides the center? It might be neat to hide him amid the action or have him off to the side a little bit...



Although if you end up following hogboy's advice, it might be best to keep him in the center.



Just a thought.

that back hill looks like a big ol butt

is that good or bad?

I was going for boobies?

looks great! i agree with the carrot looking at center bunny.

Sorry Ed

the system only allows me to push that submit button once :)

submiiiiiiiiit

O.K. I tweaked a couple things and I think this is it.

Looks ready for the KILL.

nice

this is excellent! go for it :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/21399/Crocodile_Infinity

Thanks everyone for all the great suggestions I'll be subbing it soon.



"The Root of all Evil"

this is kickass bro.

definite winner!

dude thats amazing! hahaha



the bunny with the carrot makes me laugh



wanna give mine a looksies??



http://www.threadless.com/critique/44296/ganster_wrap#lastcomment

incredible ... make it happen .. I'll buy it.



help me ...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44211/emo

Yes! Great work!

This is fantastic. Great line work on the carrot. Sub!!



hit me back

you already sub'd it... great score... shoulda cleared 3.0 in my opinion

Just do it

361 days later hahaha you guys r crazy!

it should be printed!

So. Frikkin. Cool. Sub.

hahaha where were you guys 361 days....



Thanks for checking it out either way.

I think you should sub it also :) Good work!

wow is a zombie critique, back from the dead....

don't sub it it looks way too much like this http://www.threadless.com/submission/165921/The_Root_of_All_Evil



lol