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Champi
Champi on Jul 02 '08
Who cares about what everybody will take back in their digital cams memory cards! Picture what surprises you, shoot what is beautifull for YOUR eyes!
larslau
larslau on Jul 02 '08
Quite cool!
bcrider
bcrider on Jul 02 '08
The birdie needs to be a little further around the sleeve so not to get squished in the armpit; otherwise I like this concept. Is this for the Lomography contest?
Champi
Champi on Jul 02 '08
Yes it is! It was denied but I believe some accepted designs were much worse, so I need the community opinion &/or advice!
ggepic
ggepic on Jul 02 '08
take the bird of the sleeve imo, that would look wierd on a real shirt. Maybe some more detail on the people?

I like the idea though.

critique mine please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24166/Beautiful_Lunatic

Asleep_or_awake
Asleep_or_awake on Jul 02 '08
The person that is farthest up on the shirt needs to be farther up yet. It looks like a picture is being taken of his head.



Please critique.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24109/Will_Work_For_Peace

Lyocell
Lyocell on Jul 03 '08
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I like this idea and especially the bird on the left side. but as there are cameras on it I am not sure if the LSI will accept it. wish you good luck.



my design got kicked out after one day of scorring...cause of a bad result :o(
trindli
trindli on Jul 03 '08
i don't think it was denied because they thought its bad, but because its not printable as it is. I think you need to take the bird of the sleeve to make it printable. I know they use belt printing for big things, but I have only seen prints of repetitive patterns on sleeves so far.



I would work on your figures, right now they remind me too much of the clipart figure. Give them some depth and make the person on the right stick out more
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