comments please.

I wish the heart pieces were further apart, to enhance the brokenness of it. other than that, looks nice!

The drawing itself is really well done- no need to add shapes in the background- it works well as a stand alone illustration.



Something to think about and I hate to point out the obvious but I don't think oranges get blended- they get squeezed.

what jenniferx said is true, but i like the design nonetheless

i say sub!



please come crit mine?

I think a blender would be more immediately deadly to an orange than a juicer.... so yeah, the situation works, I think. I agree about the heart, it doesn't quite look right.



The style of the shadow is distracting from your main image style. Either straighten it up, or don't use it, I think. Can we see a version without it?



Which one is the chick that broke his heart? Hehe

thanx everyone. I'll upload the new version soon, based on yall comments. The reason I choose blender is because it looks great execution and more powerful than juicer, just like Goldendust said, jump in and die straight away, haha...



Is it better if the oranges change to other object, or remain? Anyone has any suggestion?

Here I changed the heart apart, and background images has been taken out. Comments please.

looks good buddy

thx dude! what else can help me to improve?

Looks pretty funny and looks nice on the shirt.



Crit mine plz.

yeah! that's ready for a submission, I'd buy it in grey in a heart beat.

the only thing you might do is draw the blade at the bottom of the blender....(is it called something other than a blade?)...to show just how much danger our boy is in....



But even without it, this is very funny and well done...



Could you critique mine? It's called Smorgasboard



Thanks

Design looks good, try different shirt colors? Maybe turquoise would work too

submit this design! cool!

critique mine pls

Submit!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24446/My_imaginary_friend

i love it on the green. better contrast with the oranges.

this is really funny. love it.



can you take a look at mine. just wannna know people's thoughts. :)

love it! just one question, what is in his thought bubble?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/21451/Facebook_phenomenon

^please help me out and tell me what you think

all they have to do is turn the blender off

Guess that's where blood orange juice comes from. Love this! Please print!

Oh! + green works best.

i love this work!

Haha - love it! Sorry can't decide which background colour I like best.

this is aweomse!! i like the olive the best! good work!! sub it!