In honor of my late dad whoīs bday is coming up this month. I donīt know if I should re-work the eyes but I donīt want people to get the shape immediately. Any suggestions?

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hmm. . . It's okay if you don't want people to get the shape immediately, but I've been staring at it for quite some time now and I'm still not sure what I'm supposed to be seeing? Maybe make whatever the bubbles form just a little more obvious?

I like the little ellyphant dude :)

yeah, I know what you mean, itīs meant to be a bigger elephant facing his way. How can I improve this?

now that you mention that it's a great idea!

I would maybe integrate a thicker white outline or else make an outline with your eraser to make some of the facial features a bit more prominent, like the ears and the eyes, and possibly some wrinkles on the snout. I wouldn't do too much more other than that if you want to keep it subtle. . . I hope I make sense?

you do, thank you so much dude!! Iīll get to work!

rather than having the bubbles just suddenly cut off why not try to make them more into the shape of an elephant or have them spread out more at the bottom.



It is a really good idea but at first i thought the bubbles looked like a sideways pipe... I was a bit confused.

I saw the larger elephant right away, but that's the momma in me, I suppose. Perhaps if there was a more defined elephant ear in the bubbles, or if the bubbles blended out into elephant body and dissipated. I don't know. I like the whole idea and design.

There's no momma in me and I caught the elephant. Then again, I had the name of the shirt to assist that. People seeing it being worn wouldn't have that luxury.

decided to go for the whole body version, hopefully itīs clearer now.

Ooh! That would be neat if it was just like the head or start of the big elephant and the rest wrapped around to the back of the shirt! ideas! yah!



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thatīs a cool idea thx!

I actually liked the head only version; you can improve it by showing more of the head and include some details of the ear and that will be obvious.

like the bubbles, but the little elephant needs to be better.

I will wear this. But somehow i prefer V1 ( but thats just me ) keep up the good work

So touching...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28035/Caffinemaniac#lastcomment

I love the bubble effect!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28043/Cog_nition

This is awesome. I think I probably like V1 more- there is no clear ear line in V2, which I think is important, and the bubbles don't connect to the young guys trunk, which I think they should.



completely brilliant design

I like this version but do something about proportions and something to suggest closeness.



mine: http://threadless.com/critique/379561/Elis_the_Elephant

Go somewhere in between V1 and V2 i would say