Umm extremely rough





have a lot more work, just give suggestions

need suggestion for what to put on that empty orange space

how many colors?

right now there's a little mess up and there's black, but there shouldn't be



but there's 5

What used to be in the empty orange space?

Very cool... can you not have the sides so square somehow? Nice!

It looks cool but I dont think the edges should be so square. I like the colors =)

i'll try and take away the square sides



actually i will take away the square sides







nothing used to be in the empty space

bump

Can you tell me about this picture and what inspired it?

i wanted to start designing so i just had this idea of a farmhouse that was in a dream



kind of my inspiration



and then i just kind of added like it was in a dream

help!



more critique!

I can't realty tell wahat it is oter than a door and a house

strighten it up make it more understandeable and make the lines and designs cleaner

well it is a door and a house...there isn't really supposed to be a deep meaning to it

bump!

bump



please critique

Right now it's just really boxy and fuzzy. Try to get your complete image on the shirt instead of chopping it off.

maybe a person standing in the doorway?

i don't get the windows at the top.

Id suggest giving more of a shape to the spaghetti clouds, instead of one big solid shape. The door and windows seem a little odd up there and I'm not sure where to rest my eye. IDK

ok thanks to everyone



i'm going to work on this right now



thanks to everyone

bumparoo



not as grainy



adding more right now!

its kinda hard to figure out whats happening....but im all about random designs, so i dont mind it....why is the door on the 'clouds' though?

yeah it's kind of like a random design



not much meaning

it's a little too boxy for my liking... and maybe you could do a little more to the door of the house?

really boxish D:



but i like the door and floaty windows :D



and you can tell that it is definitely less sketchy :)

it would be good on a canvas, but not on a shirt.

^agree. Too much to take in for me. There are ones that I like where heaps is hapening but this doesn't do it for me sorry. Just a bit to jumbled.

I think you're on the right track, and at 13.86 years old...you'll have plenty of time to become sullied by the world and be inspired by its mire.

whoa thanks! i didn't realize this was bumped



thanks everyone



i kind of gave up on this one



and i'll probably make it on canvas

I'm known for bumping oldies...ewwwww

You talk like a 13 year old, but you design like someone much older

haha thanks



i wish i designed better

How about a chimy stack were the door should be.

How about a chimy stack were the door should be.

I do really like those patterns in the hills. But the window and the doorway do confuse me a little. And the door on the house should have a little detail or at least an outline at least on one side.

it cuts off too suddenly on the sides

Some designs benefit from not making total sence

sure...not so much in this case.