I'm still working on this but I wanted to get it out. Any sugestions on organization would be much appeciated. Thanks

I'm working on shadows to ground everything. And I was also thinking about the title TYPEometry.

It's a really cool idea, but you could probably shrink them and place them in some better way. Maybe on a white t-shirt and then have them all on a row?



Also I'd probably tone down the shade on Sphere, cylinder and cone, to make them look more like pyramid and cube.



As said, nice work.

Rearranged and added shadows.

Don't mind the lame flash I'm learning.

So what do you think of the colors and placement. Center or to the side.

Goodness no, it's now too convoluted. And the gradient is KILLER. Go back to the simpler stuff...



To have four elements so seperate makes it quite messy.



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... Grey shadow on a black shirt?

Hmm prob. right about the shadows on the black.

I agree, go much simpler - the gradients aren't working at this point.

and maybe watch all the angles too, make sure they all make sense visually together.



I've actually got a similar idea with text as well with my last design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33383/Moustaches_are_next_to_godliness_too

critique appreciated! thanks :)

Ok, so I'm having some problems deciding on an organization. Which of these do you guys like or any other suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Also do you think the title "TYPEometry sounds better.

Down one side wins.

yeah, i like the one running down the side too.

yeah definatly down one side :P





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http://www.threadless.com/submission/189495/crayon

Seems to be unanimous any other opinions.

does the c in cube need the serifs? i keep seeing a g

other than that its great, oh and down one side!





take a look at mine ?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/33600/They_re_always_after_me_lucky_charms

So I decided to change the title to TYPEometry. I'm hoping this will be the final sub for the JOT. Please post comments to let me know if any thing should be changed.

the cube is the only one that works

I also can't believe everyone said "down the side." That is by far the least aesthetic layout of all the ones you presented.

agreed

Yeah, I don't like it down the side, either. I think it's best all bunched up like a buncha' blocks.

I agree with Ryder Revolution, the cube is the only one that 'works'. If I were you I'd scrap the others and enlarge the cube.Cool, but it needs work



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but i fear that if I just used the cube it woud then be too simple.

i like the cube and the cone

maybe just use the cube as others have said, but make it a rubix cube, and it spells out cube with the colors, that might look nice

Keep working on it man. The cube works, see if you can create more forms in a way more similar to that. Keep sketching and see what you can do. It has potential.



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GREAT!

Reworked the sphere and cone, also reworked the background

better, but the Sphere, cone and cylinder don't seem to fit with the cube and pyramid...(maybe its just me).

Thinking about it, the cube on its own might be a bit too simple. It might still be worth trying though.



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I feel your pain, i hate when people do that! lol, I like the cube and pyramid the best but the shirt just seems awkward... my fav. is version 4.. the #3 box looks the best, maybe if you tried that and added a background to give the shirt a bit more story

Ok so here we go again. Joy of Text Submission.

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Okay, this is interesting. It feels a little bland though, sorry. Hmm.. Why not spice it up by putting the geometric shapes all over the shirt? (or the back?!)

i am ok with cylınder and cube. but the rest no.

Boring concept.