This is my first threadless submission! I'd love to get some feedback before I submit a design for review. I'm particularly interested in what you all think about the balance of colored shapes and uncolored shapes, the balance of color, the color scheme, design, etc, and if you think this is ready for submission. Thanks :)

i love it!!! i say submit it, and it might be my first tee i order from threadless!

ready to submit. love the colors and the placement.



my crits:

http://www.threadless.com/profile/596393/R_Thull/critiques

Meh. It's one of those designs about which I'm indifferent but that Threadless seems to love.



So, submit, I guess. I wouldn't know how to improve it.

Thanks for the feedback so far. Any others?

i think it looks nice.

you took old subject material and made it fresh which can be hard

i like the pastel colors a lot.

I like the design itself okay but consider adjusting the either the proportion or placement. The design is too large at the bottom as it draws attention straight to the hips. I suggest either shifting the design to appear to wrap around the side of the body or making it smaller.

nice colors

I don't like the placement. Higher and/ or smaller so it's not chopped off at the bottom.

Well, it's supposed to be coming off the bottom otherwise it would just end in the middle of the shirt, which would look weird. I was originally going to make it a bit smaller on the shirt, but when I put it on the model I thought it looked pretty good that way. Any other thoughts? I'll do some more mockups tonight.

Here are some alternate placing ideas. I think I like it coming from the bottom vs the top (I think it will be easier to print as well). I have a pet peeve of things just ending off in space, and the design was originally supposed to come off the bottom. But let me know what YOU think! I want to make sure this is ready before I submit it. Thanks!

BTW, the one on the right is supposed to wrap around to the back.

I like the right placement better because the left one looks cut off my his neck/ collar thing. I'd like to see front and back of tee

I just looked at your first tee and I'd say that one is the best. These ones are definetly not as good

yeah the one on the right is better but V1 is by far cooler than both

its good that you tried this, your design is very versatile

Thanks guys! I think I might submit this soon. I think I try making a flash piece that shows both the smaller and the larger placement and I'll leave it up the Threadless which one they want to do.

i like both, coming from the top and from the bottom. I like the matt color of the design which goes well with the color of the tee-shirt.

All the best to your sub!

Thanks guys! Any last comments before I submit this badboy?

Nice job! I really like it. The colors are pretty! Very hippie!



Critique mine Here

Gorgeous! and honestly perfect. :)

OK! Ready to submit! :)

like the small wrap around placement... nice work :)





Feel free to crit mine :)



Look At Me

Extinction

hmmm i cant really decide between these, but im leaning towards the large surface



Starmonster made it to the VOTING blog



http://www.threadless.com/submission/196416/Starmonster

i like the wrap around

i htink i like the wrap around best aswell! good design and GREAT color scheme!



Check out mine that im submitting later today!

PoptART

Thanks all! I'm currently waiting for the judges to review my submission and approve it for voting, so if you'd like to vote on it, please stay tuned -- watch this critique and I'll be sure to post a link to the voting. Again, thank you for helping make my first experience submitting to Threadless a good one -- so far!

Ummm, I submitted it and it was declined because of "image error" .... anybody know what that means?

BTW, my file is a 72DPI file, 640x800, PNG at 138KB, which should fit all of the file requirements.

OK, trying a different file to submit due to decline reason "image error" ... hopefully this works!

Ooo I like this design a great deal!

I prefer version - small wrap around

very nice



please crit this and this. thanks