Follow your presciption for a healthier lifestyle.

Awesome, I love it!

ROFLCOPTER!? i like it.

Looks great on the shirt!



Maybe change GUFFAW back to LMAO? I've never heard of GUFFAW and LMAO may be more recognizable to the voters (?)

Make the pills more colorful

Let Them Fly! ButterFly

Secret Heart

Birds in the Shadow

Made the colours a bit less muted

oh, and changed it back to LMAO

man this looks killer, id wear this. really like the shirt colour



To be taken .. lightly? sorry couldnt resist



10 Flaamingos!

thanks!!



I'm having a small problem trying to get the label to look right

change the text slightly



quick question, ROFL or ROFLCOPTER?



I prefer the second as it makes it a little nerdier

i like roflcopter. could you have the top to the bottle too, maybe with some text on that? might push the pallete over 8 colours i guess though.

kinda makes me think of spiritualised's packaging for ladies and gentlemen… which is no bad thing. could you have "to be taken orally" somewhere on the bottle?

I agree, perhaps replace "Take regularly" with "Taken orally", mostly because it says take at least 10 times a day and then says take regularly. Otherwise it looks almost ready to go



Can you crit mine?

Meteor

Is that a banana?

ROFL better :D nice work, i'd buy it :D

I did have it as "take at regular intervals" which makes more sense



Take orally is a much better suggestion though, thanks!!!

and I shall change to ROFL too, it keeps it a bit more consistant

I like it, just make sure all the text lines up with the capsules. the ROFL.... doesn't quite line up

nice idea! love the colours you've used as well. fix the wording on the bottle and change roflcopter to rofl and you'll be good to go.

well done, a great design



if you can, please vote on my robot and comment on my elephant

thanks

KEEP ROFLCOPTER!

sorry ryan, I think I'm going to change to ROFL....UNLESS I change TO ROFLMAO and change the LMAO to something like "Chuckle"

keep 'm all! but really fix the shadows! right now it looks like some pills are partly floating, same goes for the bottle!

I actually like ROFLCOPTER, so keep it.

I really like how all the colors are somehow working, despite the fact that they shouldn't be. Really nice choice of background shirt color to use. As far as the illo goes, the text on the bottle kind of bothers me. I dunno, it doesn't quite seem to be at the right perspective. It's only a minor problem though.



However, I think you're going to want to keep a consistent size to the words on the pills. The big ones like LOL and LMAO work, but squeezing roflcopter in (despite how funny rolfcopter is) doesn't quite work, and the Teehee is pushing it too. ROFL would work better, as the letter could be scualed to fit the pill like the other smaller words are with their pills.



Check out my latest if you've got the time!

great crits^ i much prefer the idea of keeping the words the same length and size for consistency, and I definitely agree with you about the text on the label.



same goes for the shadows! watch this space...

Changed:



- font on label and made it fit better on the bottle

- shadows

- lettering on pills

i'm much happier with the label now, I think it looks a lot more like a prescription print

looks great!

also



- tweaked the colours

- shifted pills about

- LOL and HAHA upside down so print is constant on pills (before the text went brown to red on 3 and red to brown on 2)

how the hell do you always appear when i post a crit ryan?!?!

ready to go, i'd say

question: do i need to add a bit of shine on the pills like i have in version 2 and 3?

might help them pop a bit more

shine isn't make or break for me. wouldn't hurt.

how the hell do you always appear when i post a crit ryan?!?!



lol

e-stalking

yours posts say no, but your eyes say yes

I love it hahaha!



I just dont like the dot after lol.



P.s

check out mine if you can please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44012/Holding_the_Gift_of_Life

The angle of the prescription still looks odd to me. The entire sticker/prescription seems to need to be rotated or angled slightly. Hard to describe, but it just seems so. You can see what I mean by looking at the space between the right side of the bottle and the upper right corner of the sticker (top corner, essentially). Now, compare that to the space between the lower right corner (lowest corner) of the sticker and the right side of the bottle. The latter has more space than the earlier. They should be the same.



Maybe add a little bit of a shine to the pills, and slightly thin/move the shine that runs along the side of the bottle.

yep, I agree with you about the space - I think the problem is that the bottle isn't a perfect shape, but the sticker is. I'll work on that



working on adding a bit of shine, and I'll certainly thin that down the side of the bottle too, thanks again ayearinreview! nice to have someone crit fully

probably final version

ps, the shadow had to move to the other side because the light source is coming from that direction - it doesn't make sense in the previous versions

Love it staffell :) Looks good as is, and I agree that it's ready to sub!

thanks!! anything now it just nitpicking, I doubt if this was printed on a shirt people would notice the little things



if I get no more major crits within the hour it's a subbby sub!

I'd switch the shadow back. Screw the ethics, it looks better the other way. The sticker is still bothering me ... the little bite of shine seems to suck it over to one side. I dunno, it still looks odd to me. I'm beginning to sound like a broken record.



Check out my latest if you've got the time!

I really really like this one, i hade quite a "lol"

submit

ok, i want this one ^_^ well done!!!

PS: even in real life i use LOL instead of haha ;) ...lol

realy funy. But maybye other tee color? green isnot good with red...



please vote and coment : there and there Tkanks

Also, not only do I still think that the shadows need to be flipped back to the way they were, but the shadows under the pills could be a bit darker, too.



Grafica, I disagree about the green not going with the red. It forms an oddly ideal mix of contrast and blend.



And more importantly, a lot of people get quite upset when you post links to submitted designs in a crit, or vice versa. It's okay to post a link to another crit in a crit, but easy with the pimping.

ok, i'll put the shadow to a poll on the blogs, thanks ayear - you've been most helpful - i'll crit your design asap

Always glad to help, and always glad to hear that my helps appreciated!

i subbed last week and it be up sometime tomorrow for anyone interested

sweet! i'll be looking for it! great job!



Any thoughts on my Forest design?

this is up now btw

I lol'd. Gonna go vote for it right now!



If you get a chance, check out my design

I know a different bunch of people will see this, so if you like this sub, please go



here



to score it!

oops!, i mean



here

ok, what the fuck:



here's the link in not linked format



http://www.threadless.com/submission/211684/The_Best_Medicine

bump for those who haven't voted yet

happy pillllllz

what program do you use?

I would buy that RIGHT NOW!

go vote on it then!

adobe illustrator

Hey, really cool:]

:)