He's been sitting in my sketch-book for months waiting to come to life, and I finally got around to it.
I really like this one, so please, please, please, if you vote, leave a comment, I'm putting this up for critique first because I'm open to any suggestions at all, I want Larry to be at his peak before he's turned into a piece of clothing.
He's been sitting in my sketch-book for months waiting to come to life, and I finally got around to it.
I really like this one, so please, please, please, if you vote, leave a comment, I'm putting this up for critique first because I'm open to any suggestions at all, I want Larry to be at his peak before he's turned into a piece of clothing.
I think he's cute! I'm not a fan of the highlight on his head, mostly because it goes behind the eye and looks out of place... but without it his head looks empty. Maybe try a smaller highlight that doesn't interfere with the eye?
As far as colours go, I love the blue one when he's got one gold eye... but I think the tongue and blood(?) on the teeth should be red instead of pink.
Nice to meet Larry, he looks real fun. I do like him a lot, just don't know what to think about the tips of his teeth to be quite honest. They really stand out, but I can't seem to figure out why that is.
But still, overall he looks nice and I wonder what your updated Larry will look like. I hope he doesn't lose to much character, 'cause somehow that appeals to me.
Matt - you might wanna make him just a LITTLE bit smaller on the shirt so you don't have to cut off the top right of his head. just a little narrower
I liked him when he had the one colored eye different too! Can you offer that as an option? Give two options of colored shirts and colored Larry's, maybe? Anyone else think so?
I love him. The blood on his teeth doesn't put me off, he's innocent, I'm sure of it.
Matt - you might wanna make him just a LITTLE bit smaller on the shirt so you don't have to cut off the top right of his head. just a little narrower
I don't quite understand what you mean here. Where is his head being cut off? :S
I liked him when he had the one colored eye different too! Can you offer that as an option? Give two options of colored shirts and colored Larry's, maybe? Anyone else think so?
Any colour suggestions for the two different eyes? :)
I love him. The blood on his teeth doesn't put me off, he's innocent, I'm sure of it.
He's been sitting in my sketch-book for months waiting to come to life, and I finally got around to it.
I really like this one, so please, please, please, if you vote, leave a comment, I'm putting this up for critique first because I'm open to any suggestions at all, I want Larry to be at his peak before he's turned into a piece of clothing.
:)
I really hope you guys like this.