This is actually the rework of a design I submitted for crit about two months ago. I'm still not sure if it's ready, but just wanted to see what other folk's opinons were.

I like it, isn't it Thomas Moore though?

lol. Wonderfully crafted as usual. I kinda wish it was just the john the baptist one though. I love his severed head.

Is it something wrong with the perspective on thomas? his head seems a bit bended upwards and his foot is bending down... also he cant possibly have his head there when johns foot is there too...

there is some weird stuff happening in the bottom left perspective wise. There needs to be more space there for the bottom of johns dispenser. I know that sort of thing is difficult to fix.

wow that's disrespectful. and delicious. and isn't it saint thomas moore?

i think thats good enuh tho...

at first i didnt get it and i liked it... then i got it and think its super halarious and super well done... definitly sub it

thanks guys...yea, the perspective bugs me too, but i didn't see the issue with john's foot.



it is Thomas More, though...Thomas Moore was Irish, a writer and born about 300 years later then More. oh, and he never was beheaded :)

this is a really clever design, and i'm sure will score highly on threadless, but people here often seem to dock points for yellow t shirts. maybe try some diff. color combo's to keep the masses satiated.

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I love it. If you can fix the JtB base perspective issue, it'll be perfect.



I'd suggest a green shirt.

updated it with a lot of the changes suggested. it's getting closer...

this is soooooooooo good top notch

It's really overpowering with the yellow on yellow.

yea, i'm working on color variations on sagestone and a few other colors. thanks again guys, your comments have really helped

dude, just sub this already! ur making the rest of the crits look bad!

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i hit the sub button, so it's on its way

yay!

That looks sweet i really like the john the baptist one haha it would be cool if one was open and you had a pez coming out that was red or something

love the color

looks good... maybe some candies falling out the bottom would give it a little something.
I could use your good eye for design on this critique if you have a moment.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76365/little_sea_dragon

WOW! awesome

if you have a moment

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76382/Giant_salamander

that's perfect!what are you waiting for?!submit!

...and if you have a moment watch this,and if you like it...score me ;)

http://www.threadless.com/submission/296578/Paradise_snare_1