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v1 Automnal Breath, current version








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keuj
keuj on Oct 20 '07
Any suggestions before I submit it? Thanks
JeffTerry
JeffTerry on Oct 20 '07
I like the layout, I'm not sure what the little dude is supposed to be, but I think it's good as is.
christi104hsia
christi104hsia on Oct 20 '07
haha... i was thinking.. "YETI!" but then it had chicken-like lips. haha :) the white fuzzy thing is the only thing that is bothering me. (i'm not sure what it is...)



i think it's suppose to represent winter...? it's blowing away the fall leaves so that's how i interpret it.
andreac
andreac on Oct 20 '07
Autumnal is spelled "autumnal". Funny and quirky.
ilovedoodle
   ilovedoodle on Oct 20 '07
it's a great idea, but not sure about the white chic tho... maybe a snow man??
ehrady
ehrady on Oct 20 '07
not a big issue, but the trees look very flat. not sure if thats what you are going for though.
keuj
keuj on Oct 21 '07
ahah ! Christi104hsia is right, the white dude represents winter; but it looks that it's not enough evident like this..
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