Yellow submarine
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Jul 24 '07
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grande!! muy bueno
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Buena idea! xD
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Tonteau on Jul 24 '07 Excellent idea.
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Monkey II on Jul 24 '07 awesome!
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wow! cool i love it!
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awkward text tho. sounds like it was written by someone who desnt speak english. if its not your first language, either don't use it or throw it in the crits to get some input on how it should be said!
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that is absolutely adorable.
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ya "can I have an autograph" or something like that would be less awkward.
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also, where's the window that's reflecting on his head?
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Es una buena idea. Me gusto mucho. Pero, la frase "Will you sign me an autograph" is kinda weird. I agree with Freshview on that one.
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mezo on Jul 24 '07 The phrase does read strangely, almost like an overly shy child said it, but the way it reads works with the image. Cute, simple design & very sharp illustrative skills.
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ALIADOTONY on Jul 24 '07 I like it very much, i would of made the octopus face angry!
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magandang idea!!
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$5
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Freaking Adorable $5
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Hey! Who put the poor squid into a room with windows??!
The reflection is very confusing, though I like the design... |
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this is wonderful!...muy, muy lindo
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This is gonna get printed for sure!
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Take away the text on the submarine, and yeah, whats withe the window reflection?
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Totally agree with busology82, though otherwise it's freakin' awesome.
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me encanta.
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i like the text as it is... the octopus is probably just a little flustered with admiration (plus he lacks the proper vocal mechanisms) to construct a perfect sentese
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I would take the text off of the yellow sub, because it's already obvious that's what it is. But I like the octopus text bubble and actually think the way it's written is endearing. :)
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I'm with busology82.
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I love it, it makes me smile :)
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so where is his garden?
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love it :)
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minus the window head and change the text.........then i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! good job!
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the "yellow submarine" part needs to go, and you need to find an English speaker to write the text for you.
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I love this design but I agree about what the others have said about the text. "Can I have your autograph?" sounds a lot better.
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aww, i like this exactly the way it is. sounds like a small child. :) $5
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(gasp) you did the "fastest fast food" design!! i loved that like crazy. keep 'em coming!
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adriserralta on Jul 25 '07 http://www.toyma.com/yellow-submarine-new.jpg
He introducido los cambios que me han comentado, disculpar las molestias ocasionadas por el cambio de idioma, el problema no fue no consultar...sino consultar mal consultado. He añadido algo de dinamismo al subamarino y un color más! Un saludo y si veis algo que pueda mejorar, decirmelo! |
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Está maravilloso. Me ha cautivado.
Tus diseños son fantásticos. Me he quedado con las ganas de comprar Dulces Vacaciones, pero el que venga no me lo perderé por ningún motivo. Espero sigas así, dándonos diseños tan creativos. $5 |
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adriserralta on Jul 25 '07 muchas gracias por vuestros comentarios! me alegra mucho que el idioma no sea un problema para poder comunicarnos al fin y al cabo.
Orillese, muchisimas gracias, yo espero seguri agradandote con mis diseños. |
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Mucho mejor esa versión actualizada. Aunque la sombra del pulpo la veo rara, no me termina de convencer. Quizá deberías retocarla un poco más.
De todas formas me parece una gran idea y podría quedar muy bien en camiseta. |
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I like it, though I agree that the text on the sub is unneeded. I like the way the octopus is talking, I wouldn't change that. :)
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cash_ivc on Jul 25 '07 i like it too much....with the text!
without the text i think its will be nonsense.. 5$ |
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hahaahhhah a deff. for beatle lovers...which is like..everyone
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i like it, and i sorta like the text,
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i liked it with the awkward language and i still like it with the proper language...it probably wouldn't have worked in the opposite way for people who like the proper language better, so good decision with the change. 5$ still
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Awesome keeeeep the text, the text fit's really well.
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I like it the way it is here. Awww.. Cute!
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muito bom mesmo!, great!
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haha, muy bien!
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I love it! but I think the 'yellow submarine' title will be more readable in blue
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So Beautiful!!!!
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BEATLES!!! YAY!!
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I like his shiny head!
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AMAZING.
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Loose the 'Yellow Submarine' text....
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dont do anything...$5
looks amazing. |
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Lose the text on the sub and the window reflection on the octopus and I'll have me one, ye Beatles-lovin' mate. Arggh.
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so cute! :3
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adriserralta on Jul 28 '07 http://www.toyma.com/yellow-submarine-new.jpg
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I'm thinking there's no need for the reflective bit at all, old or new. With that changed, it will be perfect.
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Me gusta la corazon (en "you")en el original.
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Why would the octopus be asking for an autograph? I don't recall any octopus like that in the movie.
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oh no, not ANOTHER octopus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Genial!
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bad_nobe on Jul 30 '07 genius!
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adriserralta on Jul 30 '07 muchisimas graciassss!
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Oswald?
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adriserralta on Jul 31 '07 oswald???? perdona...pero no entiendo nada! :)
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