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if you could just fade it into the shirt at the edges it would be really cool. But i dont really like how it just cuts off like that.
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color perhaps? i like how its just two colors, but maybe you could do yellow and white or green and white or something. but otherwise, its very peaceful and good.
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I like it a lot. But I'd like it more if the shirt was that egg shell white color instead of just plain white. Brilliant design though.
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Invert the colors...
and like they said...make a point of intrest...I think that will give it the spark it needs! |
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Reminded me of this tee: http://www.relevantstore.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=REL%2D0710
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it looks like it should be positioned down and right some. looks a bit too much like a band shirt, with the band's name cut off or something.
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