Poker in the Dark
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Feb 18 '08
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coolfive 5$
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ginetteginette on Feb 19 '08 i like the idea but i don't like the way you've portrayed it. is there a way to work out this concept so that you don't have to make that zoomed in magnified thing?
either way, i find it too organic looking, and i know you're trying to make it fit your style, but i always thought of those magnified bubbles as something on a different 'layer' so to say from the actual drawing. |
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this made me laugh. I love your concept and the rough drawing style. but I agree with ginetteginette about the zooming in. Maybe this might work as a comic strip panel better? I'd also rethink your color palette. and maybe just draw little stick figure arms and hands on them. Those hands look a little off to me. If this got printed, I might buy it anyway as-is, but I think there is definitely room for improvement and I'd love it if you worked out those little kinks and resubbed.
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popcorn doesn't have arms, silly sunshine! only hands!
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I really like the wiggly zoom thing.
well done. |
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Thanks for the comments so far! If it doesn't make it I'd certainly be willing to rework the design. I'm partial to the 'wiggly zoom thing' myself, but I can envision a few different formats for presenting the idea as well.
I do think that its current form will have appeal to some people. I hope so, anyway! Voters, vote on! |
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About my design
This is the depiction of two best friends enjoying themselves even though they've been lost to everyone else.
No fancy inks, just 5 colors on a selection of any number of muted shirt hues.