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Sep 05 '08
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1.37 from 262 votes
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ha nice... but it's too small and need some shading in the cave
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copyright?
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ginetteginette on Sep 05 '08 twist?
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@TreeFiddy: Alls I see are two generic cartoon crime fighters :)
@ginetteginette: I didn't know a pun was required. |
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ginetteginette on Sep 05 '08 well it's not required but there just isn't really anything here concept wise that's actually original. generally when someone makes a design about pop culture there is some sort of twist or gag or something to keep people interested.
but i guess this is just a fan shirt? |
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ginetteginette on Sep 05 '08 another thing is how the whole design gets cut off, if you had kept it going through the whole shirt (top to bottom) there's a lot you could have done gag wise, having the poles go all the way to the bottom of the shirt alone would be a great gag (batman and robin sliding into the wearers pants HELLO! laugh-city!)
it just seems not thought out much. i gave you a 1 though because you draw well, but everything else about it is lacking. |
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ginetteginette@ Well I guess that's something.
I like your idea, too. |
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I think this would make a fantastic t-shirt, you got my vote!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Sep 05 '08 listen to Ginette times two, she knows what she is critiquing you about. Possibly with a playground on the lower part of the design, and they are sliding down the pole towards a slide or swingset? Maybe have Robin already at the bottom swinging away!
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