Instruction manual for your heart.

a bit smaller and it would be excellent. and possibly without the circle, just have the line drawing.

I like the colors a lot, same as my old website. But the premise is lame, sorry.

Premise is alright. The excecution is great, however the image is too large.

i like what it says. I don't like the colors.

i really like the idea, but what if you shrunk the size and the of the heart and the text and then put it in a rectangle with rounded corners. maybe do the out line of the rectangle, the heart and the text all in white and then put it on a red shirt.



is that over commenting?



no? how about if the heart is white on the background color and then the text is the background (shirt color) in a white box or vice versa?

ya, reduce the image abit. not bad.

Phat illustration, the text blows.

nice shirt. it seems like the text should be very, very tiny, and on the sleeve.

it's a little too poetic to be on the front.

image is too big

description text is too literal

but nice idea

perfect forsomeone who is sensitive, caring and chemically imbalanced enough to take to heart what is written on this shirt

it's cute.

i like the design work, agree that it needs to be smaller and think that the heart thing has been way overused on this site.

it looks very nice... but i rather make the text smaller.....

no more heart designs, please? they already print like three. but it is alright i guess.

the problem with t-shirts that have a paragraph of text is that no one can appreciate it unless they stop in front of you and stare at your chest for a few seconds. And that gets annoying after the 10th time.

get rid of the text

thanks a lot for the constructive criticism, I love it!

I of course realize now that heart has been over used, however I'd like to assure you this was not and idea I got from here or somewhere else. It is quite obvious to think about placing an illustration of a heart there if you think about it.

After all, no idea is original.

finally, I appreciate the suggestions, although text there is a sort of clue, I wasnt intending for someone to read it, is just an idea of "Instruction Manual for your heart" that I really wanted to show. I suppose it could be done without the text and if I perhaps used some dotted lines with arrows or something how the blood goes or something.. *rolleyes*

I'd take a heart over a gas mask.

I fear the day that I tire of monkeys

The colors are not for me, Text waaaay to large. but the conceptual part is just excellent... 5 points!

Lovely heart icon. If you made an icon-only version in a baby-t, I'd buy it and wear the hell out it. However, I suggest you get rid of the text entirely because it's illegible and trite.

text is fantastic image is a bit iffy.

good concept . bad execution

colors horrible.

i'd buy it as a poster, but I'm real critical about what I'm going to wear 1+ times a week. Also in terms of praticality, I avoid light colored tee's. I'll keep a dark colored tee for years.

we should re-name the site HEARTLESS!!!