Tony York get out of Bill's after he drinked a good coffee, and at 4:50 pm his head experiences a sudden break down. And with the confusest voice Tony York ever had, he shouts... JESUS!
i don't know, it's probably ok to use "jesus" as an expletive in Spain but in most english-speaking countries there would be alot of offended grandmothers. that's the only thing i would change. other than that, great illustration!
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