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Kinda cool, but the red spot where the snake was cut needs some work. It looks too much like you just took an oval and filled it with red in 'paint'. But it looks kinda cool.
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End the circle. Definitely.
I would love to see the snake cycle without the scissors. I looks great as is. Much stronger image. |
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nice work on the snake, but the scissors and cut look sloppily made. If that's an intentional move, I don't get it.
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i love it...but that red circle looks awful....
i wish that bad more detail and better coloring... still cool though. 4 |
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No, thank you for it! I must admit I also have a bit of a problem with the circle, but only in the colored one on the natural t-shirt. I designed it to be black and white with only the circle red, but at the last minute decided to also offer a colored option (I feel like white t shirts are unpopular around here). I think in the black and white (larger here) because the red is so vibrant against the gray tones of the rest of the design, it makes more of a statement (which I'd hope would translate to being intentional). I think only after having worked with the black and white so long and accepting the red circle does the colored version make sense to me.
Anyway, thanks for the crit! I appreciate it. |
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snip! what really makes this design is that you used a great shape for the scissors. i don't mind the red oval, but would like to see a red edge on the other part. (just to fuss about something.)
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