This is a nice drawing, but try to promote your designs in the blog forum. Leaving links to your design on other people's designs is generally considered poor form here. It's much more helpful if you write a blog about your design and then bump it periodically, you're much more likely to get positive attention that way.
really? thanks for the tip! still trying to figure out how things work around here. i wasn't linking to mine at first but saw so many others doing it thought it was the norm. thanks for coming by all the same:)
Naw, people do that WAY too much in the critique forum. While it's not liked so much it's generally accepted there (I don't like it myself, which is why I never go in the critique forum anymore). Don't do it on actual subs, it detracts attention from the sub being scored and is generally considered rude. You're new though, so I'll let you off easy ;)
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