Kill Your Darlings!
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May 05 '05
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hahaha
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I love your style... But why do you want to kill your darlings?
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is this a reference to stephen kings book?
he talked about it in 'on writing'. im not sure if the meaning would be conveyed...but its a cool design |
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Ahaha, the poor little bears. They don't know what they're in for!
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theres 5 bears and 4 bullets!
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I think they are missile bomb things.
I do not know. Anyways, I like it, I don't know if I would wear it, but it's entirely possible. 4$ |
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i like this but i might leave out the text. that's just me though.
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I agree with the comment above, it would look better without the text.
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It seems rather disconnected. Like there's a vertical line of text, then a vertical line of bullets, then a vertical line of ... darlings. I like the concept, and the images are nice, maybe just find a way to make it flow better.
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Wow,
i`ve been out travelin`, but THANKS for all the comments. Good and bad! I know i got a couple of pointers here, that i will include in a "updated version", if the shirt get printed. :) Mathias |
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And yeah, the text is 50% of the design.
"Kill your darlings" is good line to remember when u are designing something, and u just get stuck to your first idea. Happens all the time! |
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I like it just the way it is.
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I would prefer a different font, but it's pretty good overall. 4
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Bergman, right? I like the idea but I'm not sure how I feel about the execution. If it didn't have the text it would just be another cute with scary juxtaposition, and that's a little tired. Maybe you can find a way to communicate the idea without the text, and then jsut include the text somewhere smaller (because I do think it should be on there). Anyway on the right track.
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cintrao on May 10 '05 evil message... but cool anyway!
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Wack`em!