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Listen II.

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Sep 28 '05
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Kleiner

About my design

by Kleiner
I sat all day try to edit \\\\\\\"Listen!\\\\\\\" without making it with 4 colours. so I started to move things around ,and this is the result.



hope you\\\\\\\'ll enjoy!

leiloita
leiloita on Sep 28 '05
I like it, I think it's a cool concept.
SemantiTheft
SemantiTheft on Sep 28 '05
The posture/shape of the suits doesn't feel quite right. It would be nice if their bodies weren't so obviously copies of each other and also if you didn't have just one record and two tapes in that placement... throws balance off. Also, it looks as if their pants are sagging quite a bit with that line only going up to their knees. You have a good concept, just needs polishing. Good luck!
Peppler
Peppler on Sep 29 '05
I do like this one better.
[wintermute]
[wintermute] on Sep 29 '05
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\good stuff\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\slashes are fun \\\\\\\\\\\\ I'm taking this as my signature now \\\\\\\\\ mine.\
theenjoisk8r
theenjoisk8r on Sep 29 '05
the guy on the right needs to hav a file as a head, its unbalanced
hbrasil
hbrasil on Sep 30 '05
AWESOME!!!
Kleiner
Kleiner on Oct 01 '05
Im making another Listen! ..its gonna be the 3 one ..and its gonna be great .. thx for useful tips.
egizio
egizio on Oct 02 '05
5 and buy!
tshirtlover
tshirtlover on Oct 02 '05
too high on the shirt. lower it and it would be ok...but just ok...
czarinamaker
czarinamaker on Oct 02 '05
i think it's amazing. i love how they're holding little glasses.
fadedscribbles
fadedscribbles on Oct 02 '05
i really LOVE the concept, but i agree with some of the other critiques...it could be moved down a little and if you want it to look balanced, maybe have the CD in the center, not on one side. plus, the bodies do a little too....slouchishly unrealistic? hehe, but I LOVE THE IDEA! people don't listen much these days, we're too attached to i-pods and whatnot. awesome job.
blackthorned
blackthorned on Oct 02 '05
I think the one on the far right should have an ipod instead of another casette tape.Better yet, have the casette tape on the left, the cd in the middle and the ipod on the right. It would then be more balanced and sorta be like a timeline. I agree with lowering it. And if you could give things clearner lines it'd be aswome. Then it'd be $5
what i am
what i am on Oct 02 '05
swweeeet.

soulDELAY
soulDELAY on Oct 02 '05
this reminds me of another tee... [can't recall exactly which one...]

i like the illustration... placement should be nudged down just a smig, it just seems a bit too close to the collar for me...
degrassi
degrassi on Oct 03 '05
Yeah its a lot like another sub.



And uh, blackthorned, welcome to the club where you dont understand the point on a "theme".



I dont like the border thing around them.
Kleiner
Kleiner on Oct 03 '05
I made a final design ..regarding all your tips and complains.



regarding if it feels like another tee. i can tell you ,alot of ppl within this comp. look alike , but its the details that makes them different.



If you are trying to say I stole the ide from someone else, you are wrong. After i posted this entry I saw another tee with rockers that had heads like cds though .



and another thing. blackthorn!? ..its music tunes ,so welcome to the club where u need a new pair of glasses.



thx all for the advices and complaints, I just started making tee designs and its all cause of this site..it's just that fun.
gritoescapado
gritoescapado on Oct 03 '05
I love the white one. Definite buy!
Kleiner
Kleiner on Oct 05 '05
if u wanna see the complete edition. GO TO:

www.site013.se/kleiner/listen3.gif



thx!

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