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way too much going on for a t-shirt.
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no way- this is rad. Who cares if strangers will have to walk past 8 times before they've read everything? The beauty is you know.
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"Wicked" Funny! On the back would be a better position in my humble opinion. That's just me though. 5!
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Toast burner you are too clever! Great idea!. Gray IS a good color, but I'm quite partial to green myself...but either way. I hope this one wins!
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seems like you should switch to comics, or writing stories. good idea, but i think you're in the wrong genre.
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nice idea.. but its to busy.. its also to blunt.. no offence but it looks like something i would see at walmart. 8 ( sorry
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too much going on, I like the concept though. maybe with just the kite and witch fishing text. let the illus imply more than you tell/show
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