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schleb

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by schleb
I know there are too many colors. I'd just like some feedback to know if it's worth it to make it 4 colors. Thanks
SirDingleMackintoshFoot_theYounger
Erm, no offense meant, but it's just a bit bland. I suppose it's mildly humorous, but not enough to warrant a shirt--and, design wise, it clashes. The starkness of the lines, the awkward placement, and the fact that the grey pole blends into the shirt color while the yellow jumps out make it all a bit "eh."



Nice thought, though.
Fwuzzle
Fwuzzle on Nov 16 '06
Is it humorous? I'm sorry, I just don't think it'd be a good shirt.
Auspex
Auspex on Nov 16 '06
i can't remeber where those rules are about colors
AWorldApart
AWorldApart on Nov 16 '06
Aus(Trian)Sex--- You are a genious, my friend. Theres one Godamn rule for colors. 5 COLOR LIMIT. Pathetic toilet licker...

FuckFuzzAll--- I totally get the shirt. It's a good idea. GOD! bungling bible-thumper.

MamDingalingHackingPotWoot__TheHumper. Um, excuse my manners but what the Fuh...K? Are did you turn into a CAB (ClassyAssBitch) all of the sudden? OK Mr. Godforsaken Moron, gimme some more critique on how big your fucking arsenal asshole is!



Got to love my insults, eh?
oregonian_jedi
oregonian_jedi on Nov 16 '06
No, I really don't have to love your insults.
Sputnik13
Sputnik13 on Nov 16 '06
maybe if the walking man were breakdancing or something... And I believe the majority of traffic lights have 3 (three) of the aforementioned lights. Mr/Mrs worldsapart needs to take the prescribed dosage of the right medicine

Speak_Easy
Speak_Easy on Nov 16 '06
I jaywalk & proud of it!
j.ayde
j.ayde on Nov 17 '06
im pretty sure a world apart should take it easy. i mean. this is an art website. jeez.
Softbaked007
Softbaked007 on Nov 17 '06
nice. but you gotta make it more interesting throw some humor into it, perhaps a pigeon or deer, anything to spice it up
little_mystique
little_mystique on Nov 17 '06
Thought it was 4 colour limit?

FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 17 '06
i have never seen a "world's apart" entry for a blog or submission that contained a complete sentence and/or navigable thought process in it for three months now. My suggestion is to bypass his entry quite hastily every time. As for this entry, yes, it's a walk sign ie. three hundred times less thrilling than the Labor Day shirt which isn't too exciting to begin with. My suggestion: ditch the walk sign, turn the long rod over and pretend this object is a lego toothbrush. That would be something i could get behind.
cubby cakes
cubby cakes on Nov 17 '06
make the man breakdance or something
amaliaslash
amaliaslash on Nov 17 '06
those were some stringing diatribes from AWorldApart. too bad it's a 4 color limit, and not 5.
schleb
schleb on Nov 17 '06
thanks to you who have left coherent comments. i'm working on giving it some "umph", so hopefully you'll see a better version up soon (that doesn't surpass the color limt)
5 days later
morganian
morganian on Nov 23 '06
colour limit just got raised to 5 so that might make it easier, the little man reminds my of aTV program called the Old Grey Whistle Test.
19 days later
Caasiopia68
Caasiopia68 on Dec 12 '06
no offense but its kind of boring. you could like have a car driving through there or something i dont know
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